After consulting with my supervisor Andi Spark and after feedback from my mother-in-law Doris, I am going over the pages I’ve completed so far and initiating the second draft. Or, more like version 1.2. Taking care of things like signposting between scenes, and trying to make things clearer and more cohesive in general. Filling out scenes where required, while trimming and condensing others, plus the addition of a few other clever little elements I’m testing out that should be unveiled soon…

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